Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I exercise regularly for my health.
I also try to eat balanced meals.
But I think taking a good night\'s sleep is a best way to keep my self healthy.
These days I couldn\'t take enough sleep, so I catch a cold easily.
I catch a cold last week, and it\'s my third cold in April.
강사 첨삭
Hi Seong Won!
Please take note of the use of articles and some terms.
There are definite terms to be used in specific situations.
Memorize them and practice using them.
I know you can do it.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I exercise regularly for my health.>> Correct
I also try to eat balanced meals.
>> Correct
But I think taking a good night\'s sleep is a best way to keep my self healthy.
>> However, I think having a good night\'s sleep is the best way to keep myself healthy.
These days I couldn\'t take enough sleep, so I catch a cold easily.
>> These days, I can\'t get enough sleep, so I catch a cold easily.
I catch a cold last week, and it\'s my third cold in April.
>> I caught a cold last week, and that\'s already the third time that I caught one this April.
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