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2019-04-23 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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[ESSAY] In 3-5 sentences, answer the question below: >> What is a common first date like in your country? If it\'s the first date, we usually go to a restaurant because we don\'t know about each other. During the meal, we can share our basic information such as hobbies, jobs, and so on. I think it would be almost same as the other countries. Some people say that they like watching movies during the date but I don\'t think that movies are helpful to get along with a stranger.

강사 첨삭

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Cheers!

Jean


[ESSAY]
In 3-5 sentences, answer the question below:

>> What is a common first date like in your country?

If it\'s the first date, we usually go to a restaurant because we don\'t know about each other.

>> If it\'s the first date, we usually go to a restaurant because we don\'t know anything about each other.


 During the meal, we can share our basic information such as hobbies, jobs, and so on.

>> During the meal, we can share our basic information, such as hobbies, jobs, and so on.


I think it would be almost same as the other countries.

>> I think a first date in my country would be similar in other places.


Some people say that they like watching movies during the date but I don\'t think that movies are helpful to get along with a stranger.

>> Some people say that they like watching movies during the date but I don\'t think that this activity helps strangers get along.



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