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2019-04-23 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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nice meet you Ally HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Answer the question in 5 sentences: How do you handle stress in a good way? A. When I\'m under stress, I usually sleep. I can de-stress after sleep and wake up. In another way, it is to see a movie or eat delicious things. so I think a best way is to eat something while see a movie, and then to sleep!

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!


It was so nice to meet you. ^^

Thank you for answering your homework!

See you tomorrow. ^^



~~t. Ally



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When I\'m under stress, I usually sleep.

>> CORRECT!


  I can de-stress after sleep and wake up.

>> I can relieve stress when I sleep and feel better when I wake up.


 In another way, it is to see a movie or eat delicious things.

>> Another way is to see a movie or eat some delicious food.


 so I think a best way is to eat something while see a movie, and then to sleep!

>> So I think the best way is to eat something while seeing a movie, then afterwards, go to sleep!

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