homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [이름]! Thank you for your concern. I am okay now. hahaha. I did broke a tooth from eating too much last Saturday. You guessed right, I bit my tooth on a bone. I guess that means I\'m getting old. ^_^ I couldn\'t see a dentist immediately because they were all on a holiday. -_- Good luck with your friends! I hope those teenagers will enjoy their visit to the BTS office. hahaha.
~ T. Irene~
Good morning Irene!
>>> Correct.
I was surprised When I read your mention ; you hurt your tooth because of eating too much.
>>> I was surprised when you mentioned that you broke a tooth from eating too much.
Is it really true? How much did you eat?
>>> Correct.
I cannot believe that.
>>> Correct.
you might bite something very hard food like bone or nut.
>>> You might have bitten on something very hard like a bone or a nut.
Go to see the dentist right away. the sooner, the cheaper.
>>> Go see a doctor right away. The sooner, the cheaper.
Anyway, I will meet my Indonesian friends today.
>>> Correct.
I am exciting now.
>>> I am excited now.
I will finish my work at 2pm to prepare for dinner.
>>> Correct.
I wish we have a good time with two picky teenage girls. hihi
>>> I wish to have a good time even with two picky teenage girls.
See you later ^^
>>> Correct.
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