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2019-04-23 · 첨삭 강사 Irene

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Good morining Irene! I was surprised When I read your mention ; you hurt your tooth because of eating too much. Is it really true? How much did you eat? I can not belive that. you might bite something very hard food like bone or nut. Go to see the dentist right away. the sooner, the cheaper. Anyway, I will meet my indonesian friends today. I am exciting now. I will finish my work at 2pm to prepare for dinner. I wish we have a good time with two picky teenage girls. hihi See you later ^^

강사 첨삭

Hello Ms. [이름]!  Thank you for your concern. I am okay now. hahaha. I did broke a tooth from eating too much last Saturday. You guessed right, I bit my tooth on a bone. I guess that means I\'m getting old. ^_^ I couldn\'t see a dentist immediately because they were all on a holiday. -_- Good luck with your friends!  I hope those teenagers will enjoy their visit to the BTS office. hahaha.

~ T. Irene~

Good morning Irene!

>>> Correct.
 I was surprised When I read your mention ; you hurt your tooth because of eating too much.

>>> I was surprised when you mentioned that you broke a tooth from eating too much. 
 Is it really true? How much did you eat?

>>>  Correct.
 I cannot believe that.

>>> Correct.
 you might bite something very hard food like bone or nut.

>>> You might have bitten on something very hard like a bone or a nut.

 Go to see the dentist right away. the sooner, the cheaper.
>>> Go see a doctor right away. The sooner, the cheaper.
Anyway, I will meet my Indonesian friends today.

>>> Correct. 
 I am exciting now.

>>> I am excited now.

 I will finish my work at 2pm to prepare for dinner.

>>> Correct.

 I wish we have a good time with two picky teenage girls. hihi

>>> I wish to have a good time even with two picky teenage girls.

 See you later ^^

>>> Correct.

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