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2019-04-23 · 첨삭 강사 Irene

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Would you rather ride an elephant or swim with dolphins? Do I have to choose? Cann't I do both? Why not? I really want to ride an elephant and swim with dolphins. I am so happy and exited even though I imagine. I decide now, I will swim with dolphins. I am scared if I fall down from the elephant back. I've ever seen some pepole swimming with dolphins to cure their mental sickness. it was a very interesting documentary program. They communicate and interact with dolphins to swim together, therefore When They can swim with dohphins, they feel stable and comfortable. I also want to experience those feelings from swimming with dolphins.

강사 첨삭

Hello Ms [이름]! I hope you are having a good time entertaining your guests. 😁

~Teacher Irene~
Would you rather ride an elephant or swim with dolphins?
Do I have to choose? Can’t I do both? Why not?

>>> Correct.
I really want to ride an elephant and swim with dolphins.

>>> Correct.
I am so happy and exited even though I imagine.

>>> My imagination is getting\\making me so excited.
I decide now, I will swim with dolphins.

>>> I have just decided, I want to swim with dolphins.
I am scared if I fall down from the elephant back.

>>> I am scared that I might I fall down from the elephant’s back.
I\'ve ever seen some pepole swimming with dolphins to cure their mental sickness.

>>> I\'ve even seen some people swimming with dolphins to cure their mental sickness.

it was a very interesting documentary program.

>>> Correct.
They communicate and interact with dolphins to swim together, therefore When They can swim with dohphins, they feel stable and comfortable.

>>> They communicate and interact with dolphins by swimming with them. After swimming with dohphins, they feel stable and comfortable.
I also want to experience those feelings from swimming with dolphins.

>>> Correct.

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