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What are some ways you know that you can personally keep yourself healthy?
I effort to myself for healthy life. One of things is I walking at 30 minutes in everyday. I bring for my son at kindergarten in walk. And almost do not drink liquor. Also I effort to sleep early.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
You really know how to keep yourself healthy.
You gave a variety of sentences here.
Focus on the corrections about sentence structure.
You can definitely improve.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I effort to myself for healthy life. >> I make an effort to make myself healthy.
One of things is I walking at 30 minutes in everyday.
>> One of the things I do is walking for 30 minutes every day.
I bring for my son at kindergarten in walk.
>> I walk my son to kindergarten school.
And almost do not drink liquor.
>> I rarely drink liquor.
Also I effort to sleep early.
>> I also make an effort to sleep early.
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