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2019-04-25 · 첨삭 강사 Annie

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Would you like to travel to New Zealand? Why or why not? -> I don\'t like far away country. The airplane chairs are not comfortable. Also the food is not good.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름],

Great job [이름]. Thank you for taking some time to do your homework which actually shows that you\'re interested to improve. ^^

~Teacher Annie ^^

Would you like to travel to New Zealand? Why or why not?

I don\'t like far away country.

>>I don\'t like to travel to far countries.

The airplane chairs are not comfortable.

>>The chairs in the airplane are not comfortable.

Also the food is not good.

>>Moreover, I think the food is not that delicious.

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