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Hello Ms. [이름]! 

~ T. Irene  ~

ESSAY: Do you believe there is heaven and hell? Explain
 Yes I believe there is heaven and hell.

>>>  Correct.  
 The belief makes me do right things and force to me do good tihngs.

>>>  The belief makes me do the right things and forces me to do good things.
 That means I believe after life.

>>>    That also means I believe in the after life.
 Specially Korean believe their after death life.

>>>  Most Koreans believe in life after death.  
 If we did good things and secrifice for someone or something for the good in our life, We can be born again.

>>> If we were good and have sacrificed for someone or something in life then we can be born again.

But If you did bad things or comitted crimes , we cannot be born and stayed in hell to be pusnished.

>>>   But if you did bad things or committed some crimes then you won\'t be born again. You will be in hell to be punished.

Hell is always menstioned very horrible and terrible place like frying bad peoples on a big pan with boiling oil, Tearing the body with 4 directions, 2 arms, 2 legs,

>>>   Hell has always been described as a horrible place where sinners are punished by an endless sea of boiling oil, where bad people\'s bodies are torn apart in all directions.
 Well, that side, I believe we are born to be good.

>>> With that aside, I believe the we are all born to be good.