homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Have a nice day ahead! :)
~ T. Irene ~
Hi! Irene!
>>> Correct.
I was busy last weekend.
>>> Correct.
I met my indonesian freinds and had last dinner in korea.
>>> I met my Indonesian friends and joined their last dinner in Korea.
We had fun and took many pictures with them.
>>> We had fun and I took many pictures with them.
I got nice indonesia presents from him and I gave him also korean presents.
>>> I got nice Indonesian presents from him and in return, gave some Korean presents to them too.
I feel a bit sad because we could not have much time with him.
>>> Correct.
As I told you, his daughters wanted to visit many places to tour K-pop.
>>> As I told you, his daughters wanted to visit many places where there\'s a K-pop group.
I had to yield him to his daughters. hihi
>>> I had to yield to him for his daughters. hihi
>>> I had to give in to his daughters\' wishes.
We promised that we meet in Bali someday.
>>> Correct.
I don\'t know when we can meet because my working goes on everyday. TT
>>> I don\'t know when we can meet again because my work goes on everyday. TT
Any way, I was happy to meet them and had a good time with them.
>>> Correct.
On Sunday, I took part of a Wedding party and prcticed playing golf, and also cleaned house.
>>> On Sunday, I took part in a wedding party and practiced playing golf after. Then , I cleaned the house too.
I am exhaused hihi.
>>> Correct.
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