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2019-04-29 · 첨삭 강사 Irene

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Hi! Irene! I was busy last weekend. I met my indonesian freinds and had last dinner in korea. We had fun and took many pictures with them. I got nice indonesia presents from him and I gave him also korean presents. I feel a bit sad because we could not have much time with him. As I told you, his daughters wanted to visit many places to tour K-pop. I had to yield him to his daughters. hihi We promised that we meet in Bali someday. I don't know when we can meet because my working goes on everyday. TT Any way, I was happy to meet them and had a good time with them. On Sunday, I took part of a Wedding party and prcticed playing golf, and also cleaned house. I am exhaused hihi.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!  Have a nice day ahead! :)

~ T. Irene ~

Hi! Irene!
>>> Correct.

 I was busy last weekend.

>>> Correct. 
 I met my indonesian freinds and had last dinner in korea.

>>>  I met my Indonesian friends and joined their last dinner in Korea.
 We had fun and took many pictures with them.

>>>  We had fun and I took many pictures with them. 
 I got nice indonesia presents from him and I gave him also korean presents.

>>> I got nice Indonesian presents from him and in return, gave some Korean presents to them too.
 I feel a bit sad because we could not have much time with him.

>>> Correct.
 As I told you, his daughters wanted to visit many places to tour K-pop.

>>>  As I told you, his daughters wanted to visit many places where there\'s a K-pop group.

I had to yield him to his daughters. hihi

>>> I had to yield to him for his daughters. hihi

>>> I had to give in to his daughters\' wishes.
 We promised that we meet in Bali someday.

>>> Correct. 

I don\'t know when we can meet because my working goes on everyday. TT

>>> I don\'t know when we can meet again because my work goes on everyday. TT
 Any way, I was happy to meet them and had a good time with them.

>>> Correct. 
 On Sunday,  I took part of a Wedding party and prcticed playing golf, and also cleaned house.

>>>  On Sunday,  I took part in a wedding party and practiced playing golf after. Then , I cleaned the house too.

I am exhaused hihi.

>>> Correct. 


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