homework
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[ESSAY]
In 3-5 sentences, answer the question below:
>> What are your greatest professional strengths?
I am engaged in the IT industry, and it requires continuous development. Because new technologies are being released everyday and if you don\'t study them then you would go down to nothing in this industry.
>> I am engaged in the IT industry, and it requires continuous development because new technologies are being released everyday, and if you don\'t study them then you will go down to nothing in this industry.
That\'s why I keep studying about new technologies and trying not to become a loser. So, the effort is my best professional strength now.
>>That\'s why I keep studying about new technologies and trying not to become a loser. So, effort is my best professional strength now.
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