Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
When I just talk with my friend, I laugh out loud without particular reason.
I think being with my close friend makes me e happy enough, so just doing pleasant talking with her can make me laugh.
Now I\'m lying on my bed, thinking about what to write in here.
I want to wear school uniforms which I wear in summer, but my mom doesn\'t let me to do.
강사 첨삭
Hi Seong Won!
The greatest thing in life is having someone you can just laugh with.
I\'m glad that you have that in your life.
You were very clear in your expressions today.
Good job!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
When I just talk with my friend, I laugh out loud without particular reason.
>> When I talk with my friend, I laugh out loud without any particular reason.I think being with my close friend makes me e happy enough, so just doing pleasant talking with her can make me laugh.
>> I think being with my close friend makes me happy enough, so just talking pleasantly with her can make me laugh.
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