Homework

Hi, [이름]! ^^
Thank you for writing this beautiful essay.
I totally agree that although outer beauty is important, inner beauty is far more valuable.
I\'m glad to hear that the latter one is more important for you.

I hope you\'re having a great night.

See you again tomorrow.

~Teacher Charry ^^v

I think beauty is different for every person.

>> CORRECT!

Obviously, we have the same and universal standard of beauty.

>> Obviously, we have the same and universal standard for beauty.

However, everyone has his or her own standard when it comes to beauty.

>> CORRECT!

some people regard their appearance as the most important criteria and they try to do their bests to have more clear skin, skinny body and beautiful face.

>> Some people regard their appearance as the most important criteria and they try to do their best to have clearer skin, skinny body and beautiful face.
On the other hand, some people set their inner beauty above all.

>> CORRECT!

They think good and warm heart, positive mindset and consideration are much more important than outer beauty.

>> They think a good and a warm heart, a positive mindset and consideration are much more important than outer beauty.
Personally, I think appearance is important to give a good impression especially If I would be a member of a company or a group because I would be a representative of that group.

>> Personally, I think appearance is important in giving a good impression especially if I would be a member of a company or a group because I would be a representative of that group.

However, The most important thing for me is that I have warm, positive and considerate mind when I deal with people around me.

>> However, the most important thing for me is to have a warm, positive and considerate mind when I deal with people around me.