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2019-05-01 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

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I think a productive person is a planned person. They can organize everything well. But I can\'t. Nevertheless, I have a lot of things to do, I\'m not a prouductive person. One of my friends is a productive person. She makes a list and determines the order. It goes well. I tried to do my work systematically like her. But it gave me stress. That\'s why I gave up organazation. I just try to have priority at my works. And I now know that the thing that I have to do is supposed to be finished by the time deadline.

강사 첨삭

Hi Ms. [이름]!


It\'s a wonderful Wednesday :), time runs so fast. Anyway, we do have our own techniques in doing our everyday routine.

Thus, being productive is our target every day. It\'s just that we\'ve got our own ways. :)


Stay focused on being productive. Always go the extra mile. Fight for the things that matter to you. :)


sincerely,

Teacher Lucy


I think a productive person is a planned person.

>>CORRECT!

>>I think a productive person applies person-centered planning.


They can organize everything well. 

>>CORRECT!

>>They are good at organizing.


But I can\'t.

>>CORRECT!

>>Which is I\'m not good at.


Nevertheless, I have a lot of things to do, I\'m not a prouductive person.

>>Nevertheless, I have a lot of things to do and I\'m not a productive person.


One of my friends is a productive person. 

>>CORRECT!

>>I\'ve got a productive friend.


She makes a list and determines the order.

>>CORRECT!

>>She prepares list and executes successfully.


It goes well.

>>CORRECT!

>>She\'s good at it.


I tried to do my work systematically like her.

>>CORRECT!

>>I try to copy her.


 But it gave me stress.

>>CORRECT!

>>But it gave me burden.


That\'s why I gave up organazation.

>>That\'s why I gave up organizing.


 I just try to have priority at my works. 

>> I just try to have priority at my work.


 And I now know that the thing that I have to do is supposed to be finished by the time deadline.

>>And I now know that the thing that I have to do is supposed to be finished by the time of deadline.

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