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My friends make me laugh out loud. When we talk together, we usually talk funny things. For example, we talk about what happened in math calss. A boy who sit next to me slept, and he bump his head into the desk. And we laugh together.
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My friends make me laugh out loud. >> Correct
When we talk together, we usually talk funny things.
>> When we talk to each other, it\'s usually about funny things.
For example, we talk about what happened in math calss.
>> For example, we talk about what happened in Math class.
A boy who sit next to me slept, and he bump his head into the desk.
>> A boy who was sitting next to me was sleeping, and he bumped his head on the desk.
And we laugh together.
>> Then, we laughed together.
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