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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Ms. [이름]! Thanks for your thoughts regarding this topic. Wow! You had a strong and wild imagination when you were young. I only dreamt that I was adopted and my real RICH parents are looking for me. Ha ha ha. ^_^
~ T. Irene ~
ESSAY: Have you ever had imaginary friends when you were young?
When I was a young girl, I believed that I came from another world like a star in space.
>>> Correct.
>>> When I was a young girl, I believed that I came from another world like a star in outer space.
I thought, I was a princess of the star but I made a big mistakes therefore I got punishment living in earth.
>>> I imagined that I was a princess from a start but I made a big mistake and I got punished by living on earth.
Whenever I was scolded from my parents, I cried and prayed to god for going back to my real world.
>>> Whenever I was scolded by my parents, I cried and prayed to God to send me back to my real world.
Do you want to ake me that I still think I am alien?
>>> Do you want to ask me whether I still think I\'m an alien?
Well, I am 47 years old, that means I have been living here for 47 years.
>>> Correct.
>>> Well, I am 47 years old now so that means I have been living here for 47 years.
I don\'t remember anymore where my real worldm where the star is is.
>>> I don\'t remember anymore where my real world is or which star I came from.
But from time to time, I am still thinking when my punishement will end and go back home with a small smile.
>>> But from time to time, I still wonder when my punishment will end so I can go back home.
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