homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [이름]! ^_^ I do understand that your gums are sensitive or are getting weak such that the roots of your teeth are easily exposed. I smiled when you mentioned your husband. Men are supposedly strong and brave but they usually become babies in from of the dentist. hahaha
~ T. Irene ~
Hi Irene!!
I am sorry not to answer your call immediately.
>>> I am sorry for not answering your call immediately.
I went to the dentist yesterday and checked my tooth.
>>> I went to the dentist yesterday and had my teeth checked.
Doctor said I do great job for my tooth care.
>>> The doctor said I did a great job in caring for my teeth.
but my gums are getting weak therefore my tooth expose the root of tooth, ( do you understand? It\'s difficult to explain in English)
>>> But my gums are getting weak such that the roots of my teeth are easily exposed. ( Do you understand? It\'s difficult to explain in English)
I need to cover my tooth foot.
>>> I need have the base of my teeth covered.
My husband was shivering on a dental chair with worries and pain.
>>> My husband was waiting for me anxiously and painfully. He was worried about me.
It looked so funny.
>>> Correct.
He became a little boy when he goes to the dentist.hihi
>>> He becomes like a little boy whenever he goes to the dentist. hihi
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