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2019-05-03 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

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I\'d like to read a book tonight. Yesterday, I borrowed two books from the neighbor library. The title is \"An obstructor\" and the writer is \"OKUDA HIDEO\" who is a Japanese. I like his books. He is unique writer and he focuses on people\'s inside psychologically. He used to be an editor, a copy wirter, a scriptwriter and a producer. As a result of various careers, he became a famous writer. That\'s why his books are read easily. His sentences are understandable. He seems to pursue a happy ending.(This is my perspective. I\'m not sure what is his thought) I hope that I can start to read his book today after I finish my work. If I can\'t, I\'ll definitely read those books this weekend.

강사 첨삭

Good Friday Ms. [이름]!


I hope you\'re doing great. Reading is really an entertaining hobby. It makes you explore the world and trying to figure out a certain thing by imagining.

It feels wonderful. As they say a reader lives a thousand lives before he dies. The man who never reads lives only one.


Books train your imagination to think big. :)


sincerely,

Teacher Lucy



I\'d like to read a book tonight.

>>CORRECT!

>>I\'d love to read a book tonight.


Yesterday, I borrowed two books from the neighbor library.

>>CORRECT!

>>I borrowed two books from the neighbor library yesterday.


The title is \"An obstructer\" and the writer is \"OKUDA HIDEO\" who is a Japanese.

>>CORRECT!

>>The book\'s entitled \"An Obstructer\" and the author is \"Okuda Hideo\" who\'s a Japanese.


I like his books.

>>CORRECT!

>>I appreciate his books.


He is unique writer and he focuses on people\'s inside psychologically.

>>CORRECT!

>>He\'s an exceptional writer and he concentrates on personality psychology.


He used to be an editor, a copy wirter, a scriptwriter and a producer.

>>CORRECT!

>>He\'s known as an editor, a copy writer, a scriptwriter and a producer.


As a result of various careers, he became a famous writer.

>>As a result of his various career, he became a famous writer.


That\'s why his books are read easily.

>>CORRECT!

>>That\'s why his books are easy to read.


His sentences are understandable.

>>CORRECT!

>> His sentences are readable.


He seems to pursue a happy ending.

>>CORRECT!

>>He appears to maintain a positive ending.


(This is my perspective. I\'m not sure what is his thought)

>>This is my perspective. I\'m not sure of his thoughts.


I hope that I can start to read his book today after I finish my work.

>>CORRECT!

>>I wish I can start reading his book after work.


If I can\'t, I\'ll definitely read those books this weekend.

>>CORRECT!

>>If I can\'t, I\'ll definitely read those books during the weekend.

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