homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good Friday Ms. [이름]!
I hope you\'re doing great. Reading is really an entertaining hobby. It makes you explore the world and trying to figure out a certain thing by imagining.
It feels wonderful. As they say a reader lives a thousand lives before he dies. The man who never reads lives only one.
Books train your imagination to think big. :)
sincerely,
Teacher Lucy
I\'d like to read a book tonight.
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>>I\'d love to read a book tonight.
Yesterday, I borrowed two books from the neighbor library.
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>>I borrowed two books from the neighbor library yesterday.
The title is \"An obstructer\" and the writer is \"OKUDA HIDEO\" who is a Japanese.
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>>The book\'s entitled \"An Obstructer\" and the author is \"Okuda Hideo\" who\'s a Japanese.
I like his books.
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>>I appreciate his books.
He is unique writer and he focuses on people\'s inside psychologically.
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>>He\'s an exceptional writer and he concentrates on personality psychology.
He used to be an editor, a copy wirter, a scriptwriter and a producer.
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>>He\'s known as an editor, a copy writer, a scriptwriter and a producer.
As a result of various careers, he became a famous writer.
>>As a result of his various career, he became a famous writer.
That\'s why his books are read easily.
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>>That\'s why his books are easy to read.
His sentences are understandable.
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>> His sentences are readable.
He seems to pursue a happy ending.
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>>He appears to maintain a positive ending.
(This is my perspective. I\'m not sure what is his thought)
>>This is my perspective. I\'m not sure of his thoughts.
I hope that I can start to read his book today after I finish my work.
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>>I wish I can start reading his book after work.
If I can\'t, I\'ll definitely read those books this weekend.
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>>If I can\'t, I\'ll definitely read those books during the weekend.
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