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2019-05-03 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

학생이 쓴 원문

1) Mount Everest is highest than all other Mount. 2) Yesterday evening l was play game. 3) At the moment my heart was pounding. 4) We enjoyed our holyday in Spain, because we was visited Madrid. 5) We were really hungry, so we were found food . 6) The famous book \"David Copperfield\" is my favorite book. 7) I was watching TV, It\'s funny. 8) Peter is very friendly and everybody love him. 9) I can\'t come with you because I\'m sick. 10) The concert was really exciting and there were came many people.

강사 첨삭

1) Mount Everest is highest than all other Mount.
>> the highest mountain in the world.
2) Yesterday evening l was play game.
>> Yesterday evening, I played a game.
 3) At the moment my heart was pounding.
>> At the moment, my heart is pounding.
4) We enjoyed our holyday in Spain, because we was visited Madrid.
>> We enjoyed our holyday in Spain because we visited Madrid.
5) We were really hungry, so we were found food .
>> We were really hungry, so we looked for a restaurant.
6) The famous book \"David Copperfield\" is my favorite book.
>> Correct
7) I was watching TV, It\'s funny.

>> I was watching TV when the phone rang.
8) Peter is very friendly and everybody love him.
>> Peter is very friendly and everybody loves him.
9) I can\'t come with you because I\'m sick.
>> Correct
10) The concert was really exciting and there were came many people.

>> The concert was really exciting and there were many people who came.

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