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My name is [이름] su Ryeon. My name is given by my father. He talked to me that my name equal \'lotus\'. In Buddha, lotus means when someone in the terrible situation, that someone keeps one\'s faith. And another means budding with pure and aroma to purify the world. Those means, I love my name and thank you for my father. So I want to live with a firm faith and I don\'t falter in any situation. I want to be a person who can change someone for the best. Until now, I don\'t heard the name of Su Ryeon. For example, I have two friends who have the name called \'Hyeon A\', and I have three friends who have the name called \'Min ji\' but I don\'t meet the person who has the name called \'su ryeon\'. So I feel that I am the special person in the world. Conclusionally, I love my name.

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My name is [이름] su Ryeon.

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or>>I am [이름] su Ryeon.

My name was given by my father.

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or>>I was named by my father.

He talked to me that my name equal \'lotus\'.

>>He told me that my name means \'lotus\'.

In Buddha, lotus means when someone in the terrible situation, that someone keeps one\'s faith.

>>In Buddhism, lotus means someone who is in a terrible situation, but that person still keeps his faith intact.

And another means budding with pure and aroma to purify the world.

>>And the other meaning is a budding flower that exudes a pure aroma, as it purifies the world.

Those means, I love my name and thank you for my father.

>>I love my name because of these two meanings and I thank my father for it.

So I want to live with a firm faith and I don\'t falter in any situation.

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or>>So, I want to live firmly in my faith and not to falter in any situation.

I want to be a person who can change someone for the better.

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>>I would like to be someone who has the power to influence another person for the better.

Until now, I don\'t heard the name of Su Ryeon.

>>Up to now, I haven\'t heard of anyone named Su Ryeon.

For example, I have two friends who have the name called \'Hyeon A\',

>>For example, I have two friends who are both named \'Hyeon A\'.

and I have three friends who have the name called \'Min ji\' but I don\'t meet the person who has the name called \'su ryeon\'.

>>And I have three friends who are all named \'Min ji\', but I haven\'t met a person with a name like \'su ryeon\'.

So I feel that I am the special person in the world.

>>So, I feel that I am a very special and unique person in the whole world.

Conclusionally, I love my name.

>>In conclusion, I love my name.