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2019-05-03 · 첨삭 강사 Irene

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ESSAY: (Hypothetical) If you will start counting the stars in the heavens today, when will you finish? How about your hair? Oh~~I feel dizzy when I imagine counting stars and hair. I think that It takes about 12 years to count stars. because earth is moving everyday and it will come back the exactly same location after 12 years. (Is that right?) I can make a challenge counting hair. I may can finish counting my husband hair (not my hair) today if I have to do. because my husband hair is less than my hair. I can count my husband hair before the hair grow. hihihi I am curious what they can know and find through this question. But It was funny question to me. You always make me happy and embarrass with unique topics.

강사 첨삭

Ms. [이름], thank you so much for reacting to this homework. When I gave this homework, I knew it was a silly one. But I really wanted to get the reaction of my students. I mean I want to know what they think of this question. I am not exactly looking for an answer. I am, instead, waiting for a reaction. ^_^  So thank you so much for your prompt response. ^_^ Do you know that when I first learned about the stars and constellations in school, I did try counting them just because I wanted to prove to my teachers and classmates that I could do that. It would mean then that I am the only person who could do it. Sadly, I never finished counting them. ha ha ha. It takes a year, 365 days, for the Earth to revolve around the sun going back to the exact same location.

~ T. Irene ~

ESSAY: (Hypothetical) If you will start counting the stars in the heavens today, when will you finish? How about your hair? 
Oh~~I feel dizzy when I imagine counting stars and hair.

>>> I feel dizzy imagining how I can count the starts or the hair on my head.
 I think that It takes about 12 years to count stars.

>>> I think it will take about 12 years to finish counting the stars.

because earth is moving everyday and it will come back the exactly same location after 12 years. (Is that right?)
>>> This is
because the Earth is moving everyday and it will come back to the exact same location after 1 year. (Is that right?)
I can make a challenge counting hair.

>>> I can take on the challenge of counting hairs.
 I may can finish counting my husband hair (not my hair) today if I have to do.

>>> I may be able to finish counting my husband\'s hair (not my own) today if I have to.

because my husband hair is less than my hair.

>>> This is because my husband\'s hair is thinner than mine.
 I can count my husband hair before the hair grow. hihihi
>>> 
 I can actually count my husband\'s hair before it grows long again. hihihi
I am curious what they can know and find through this question.

>>> I am curious what people can know or discover with this question?
 But It was funny question to me.

>>>  But it was a funny question for me.
 You always make me happy and embarrass with unique topics.

>>> You always make me happy and feel weird with these unique topics.





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