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If I could win the election and become a politician, the first law I would implement is that all of employee can be given day off yealy a month
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Hi, [이름]!
Think that\'s a great idea! ^^
As employees, I think we are all well aware of how much stress we go through every time we go to work.
I think a whole month of vacation would help us release some of the stress. ^^
~~t. Ally
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If I could win the election and become a politician, the first law I would implement is that all of employee can be given day off yealy a month
>> If I could win the election and become a politician, the first law I would implement is for all employees to be given one whole month of vacation yearly.
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