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I wish I could use my phone everyday. Usually I don\'t use much phone when I have a lot of homework. But I think I always have a lot of homework. so I can\'t use my phone. And what I really want to do with my phone is waching tic toc, YouTube video and chat with my friend with Kakao Tok. So I wish I could use my phone everyday
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Hi [이름]!
Good luck with your anniversary!
I hope you can make wonderful memories.
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I look forward to talking with you again.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I wish I could use my phone everyday. >> I wish I could use my phone every day.
Usually I don\'t use much phone when I have a lot of homework.
>> I don\'t usually use my phone when I have a lot of homework.
But I think I always have a lot of homework.
>> However, I think that I will always have a lot of homework.
so I can\'t use my phone.
>> That\'s why I can\'t use my phone that much.
And what I really want to do with my phone is waching tic toc, YouTube video and chat with my friend with Kakao Tok.
>> I like watching Tic Toc and YouTube videos as well as chatting with my friends on Kakao Talk using my phone.
So I wish I could use my phone everyday
>> That\'s why I wish I could use my phone every day.
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