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2019-05-08 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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[ESSAY] In 3-5 sentences, answer the question below: >> What are your greatest professional strengths? I have wide experiences in the IT industry. I\'ve been working in a data center so that I\'ve been having to work from a physical level, such as deploying lacks, connecting cables, etc. Plus, I have to manage not only the hardware but also OS, application, and so on were my responsibility.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

Thank you for sending your homework.

Cheers!
Jean

[ESSAY]
In 3-5 sentences, answer the question below:

>> What are your greatest professional strengths?

I have wide experiences in the IT industry.
>> I have a wide range of experience in the IT industry.

I\'ve been working in a data center so that I\'ve been having to work from a physical level, such as deploying lacks, connecting cables, etc.
>> I\'ve been working at a data center that\'s why my work is physically taxing as I deploy lacks [not sure what this is], connect cables, etc.

Plus, I have to manage not only the hardware but also OS, application, and so on were my responsibility.
>> In addition, I have to manage not only the hardware but also the OS, and so on since they are included in my job description.

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