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When I am under pressure, I will draw the painting and I will study languages.
If I do that, I don\'t think about a complicated problem.
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Hi, [이름]!
That\'s a wonderful way to release some stress in a very peaceful manner.
Thank you so much for sharing this. ^^
I wish I could see some of your paintings someday.
~~t. Ally
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When I am under pressure, I will draw the painting and I will study languages.
>> When I am under pressure, I create some paintings and try to study some languages.
If I do that, I don\'t think about a complicated problem.
>> When I do these things, it makes me think less of all the complicated problems in life.
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