homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! It\'s such a wonderful experience to always chat with you.
~ T. Irene ~
ESSAY: What are the three things that you don\'t like about yourself? Should you change them or would you like to change? How?
I do really like me about most of myself.
>>> I do like most things about myself.
If I have to tell you three things that I don\'t like about myself.
>>> I cannot think of three things that I don\'t like about myself.
I can tell you those three things.
>>> I will try to tell you three things though.
1. Smoking.
>>> Correct.
I have been smoking since I was 21 years old.
>>> Correct.
I really stop smoking but I failed two times to quit smoking.
>>> I really tried to stop smoking but I somewhat failed twice already.
Maybe, I need a very strong hitting shock to stop smoking.
>>> Maybe I need a strong reason to finally stop smoking.
2. Drinking a lot
>>> Correct.
I like drinking with my friends and my love ones.
>>> Correct.
It is not a so bad habbit but the problem is, I drink until I am drunk.
>>> I don\'t think it is a bad habit but I do drink until I am so drunk.
sometimes I feel I am a soaker. hihi
>>> Sometimes, I feel like a sucker.
3. Easy to believe anyone.
>>> Easily believe anyone
I am so kind to everyone and I feel comfortable with anyone.
>>> Correct.
>>> I try to be kind to everyone and feel comfortable with anyone.
I mean I get always friendly feeling although I meet someone at the first time.
>>> I mean I try to be friendly even with people I met for the first time.
I am inditmate with anyone therefore i have been dececivd and into troubles.
>>> Being that kind of person, I have been deceived and was in trouble.
I know I have to not to do those things but It is so hard to change myself.
>>> I believe that I should do something about these things but it is so hard to change myself.
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