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2019-05-07 · 첨삭 강사 Irene

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ESSAY: What are the three things that you don't like about yourself? Should you change them or would you like to change? How? I do really like me about most of myself. If I have to tell you three things that I don't like about myself. I can tell you those three things. 1. Smoking. I have been smoking since I was 21 ysear old. I reaally stop smoking but I failed two times to quit smoking. Maybe, I need a very strong hitting shock to stop smoking. 2. Drinking a lot I like drinking with my friends and my love ones. It is not a so bad habbit but the problem is, I drink until I am drunk.sometimes I feel I am a soaker. hihi 3. Easy to believe anyone. I am so kind to everyone and I feel comfortable with anyone. I mean I get always friendly feeling although I meet someone at the first time. I am inditmate with anyone therefore i have been dececivd and into troubles. I know I have to not to do those things but It is so hard to change myself.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! It\'s such a wonderful experience to always chat with you.

~ T. Irene ~

ESSAY: What are the three things that you don\'t like about yourself? Should you change them or would you like to change? How? 
I do really like me about most of myself.

>>> I do like most things about myself.         
 If I have to tell you three things that I don\'t like about myself.

>>>  I cannot think of three things that I don\'t like about myself.   
 I can tell you those three things.

>>> I will try to tell you three things though.    
 1. Smoking.

>>> Correct.    
 I have been smoking since I was 21 years old.

>>> Correct.    
 I really stop smoking but I failed two times to quit smoking.

>>> I really tried to stop smoking but I somewhat failed twice already.    
 Maybe, I need a very strong hitting shock to stop smoking.

>>> Maybe I need a strong reason to finally stop smoking.    
 2. Drinking a lot

>>> Correct.    
 I like drinking with my friends and my love ones.

>>>  Correct.  
 It is not a so bad habbit but the problem is, I drink until I am drunk.

>>>  I don\'t think it is a bad habit but I do drink until I am so drunk.

sometimes I feel I am a soaker. hihi

>>> Sometimes, I feel like a sucker.     
 3. Easy to believe anyone.

>>>  Easily believe anyone  
 I am so kind to everyone and I feel comfortable with anyone.

>>> Correct. 

>>> I try to be kind to everyone and  feel comfortable with anyone.  

I mean I get always friendly feeling although I meet someone at the first time.

>>> I mean I try to be friendly even with people I met for the first time.    
 I am inditmate with anyone therefore i have been dececivd and into troubles.

>>>  Being that kind of person, I have been deceived and was in trouble.   
 I know I have to not to do those things but It is so hard to change myself.

>>>  I believe that I should do something about these things but it is so hard to change myself.   

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