homework

Kelly!  Indeed, you are back! ^_^

~ T. Irene ~

hello, teacher, I\'m back:) thanks to wake me up today ^^

>>> Hello, teacher, I\'m back:) Thanks for waking me up today ^^
 I\'m trying to wake up early in the morning from tomorrow.

>>> I will try to wake up early in the morning starting tomorrow.
 I\'m going to use this essay page the same way as before, so could you correct my grammar, please?
>>> Correct.  
I want to become a superstar.

>>> Correct.  

there are a lot of advantages to be a celebrity, and the first one is that I can take a lot of money easily.

>>> There are a lot of advantages to being a celebrity and the first one is that I can easily earn a lot of money.
 Besides that, they usually are managed by professionals, so I\'m pretty sure that this is the reason they are becoming beautiful and handsome.

 >>>  Besides that, they usually are managed by professionals so I\'m pretty sure that this is the reason they become beautiful and handsome. 
Nevertheless, one of the drawbacks is that they are going to open to the public all of their privacy.

>>> Nevertheless, one of the drawbacks is that their lives are open to the public all and there is no privacy.
 last week, I was clean up my place.

>>> Last week, I cleaned up my place.

It was getting really messy since I had a lot of clotheses.

>>> It was getting really messy since I have/own a lot of clothes.

And I though there were too much stuff that I never use.

>>> And I thought there were too much stuff that I never use. .  

but, it was hard to discard because they were really as good as new.

>> But, it was hard to discard because they were almost good as new.
 As I told a friend, she recommended me to donate them for her coworkers who need clothes for practice.

>>> When I told a friend, she recommended me to donate them to her co-workers who need clothes for practice.
 So, I was able to help someone and even protect the environment.

>>> So, I was able to help someone and even protected the environment from trash if I just threw them away.