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2019-05-08 · 첨삭 강사 Elly

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Actually, I don\\\'t think about the bad things. Becasue even the bad things will be occured someday. So it doesn\\\'t need to avoid. Up to now, I have heard that I am positive, confidence person and have no worries. Although planning the future is essential, but I thnik it is more important that a person concentrate what needs to be done now. And I think it is a good habit that don\\\'t think about the negative results. For example, there are two people who would like to apply for A company. One person believes he or she will enter A company so he or she will apply for it. But the other person is worried that he or she will fail for it so he or she doesn\\\'t apply for. I think future will be changed depending on how I do it. One of the best ways is to predict the negative situation and then prepare for. If you do so, your worries will disappear.

강사 첨삭

Hello Eve,

Thank you for writing your thoughts down!

I appreciate all your efforts!

Have a fantastic Wednesday and talk to you next time!

Teacher ELLY.

Homework

Actually, I don\\\'t think about the bad things.

>>Actually, I don\'t worry too much about bad things.

or>>Actually, I don\'t worry too much if things are to go wrong.

Becasue even the bad things will be occured someday.

>>Because, even bad things will occur someday.

or>>Because, trials and hardships are bound to happen one day.

So it doesn\\\'t need to avoid.

>>So, it doesn\'t have to be avoided at all cost.

or>>So, it’s unnecessary to try and avoid these things from happening.

Up to now, I have heard that I am positive, confidence person and have no worries.

>>Up to now, I have heard that I am a positive and a confident person with no worries.

Although planning the future is essential, but I thnik it is more important that a person concentrate what needs to be done now.

>>Although, planning the future is essential, but I think it is more important that a person has to concentrate on what needs to be done now.

And I think it is a good habit that don\'t think about the negative results.

>>And, I think it is a good habit that I don\'t dwell on the negative results.

For example, there are two people who would like to apply for A company.

CORRECT!

or>>An example would be about two people who plans to apply for a job at A company.

One person believes he or she will enter A company, so he or she will apply for it.

CORRECT!

or>>One of them has faith that he or she will be able to get a job at A company, so he or she submitted a resume.

But the other person is worried that he or she will fail for it so he or she doesn\\\'t apply for.

>>But the other person is worried that he or she will fail, so this person didn\'t apply.

I think future will be changed depending on how I do it.

>>I think, the result of my future can be changed depending on what I do with my life.

or>>I think, my future is conditional depending on what I do with it.

One of the best ways is to predict the negative situation and then prepare for.

>>One of the best ways is to predict the negative situation and then prepare for it.

or>>A perfect solution would be to come up with some probable negative situations so you can prepare for them.

If you do so, your worries will disappear.

CORRECT!

or>>If you follow such suggestion, you won’t have worries anymore.

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