homework
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Teacher ELLY.
Homework
Actually, I don\\\'t think about the bad things.
>>Actually, I don\'t worry too much about bad things.
or>>Actually, I don\'t worry too much if things are to go wrong.
Becasue even the bad things will be occured someday.
>>Because, even bad things will occur someday.
or>>Because, trials and hardships are bound to happen one day.
So it doesn\\\'t need to avoid.
>>So, it doesn\'t have to be avoided at all cost.
or>>So, it’s unnecessary to try and avoid these things from happening.
Up to now, I have heard that I am positive, confidence person and have no worries.
>>Up to now, I have heard that I am a positive and a confident person with no worries.
Although planning the future is essential, but I thnik it is more important that a person concentrate what needs to be done now.
>>Although, planning the future is essential, but I think it is more important that a person has to concentrate on what needs to be done now.
And I think it is a good habit that don\'t think about the negative results.
>>And, I think it is a good habit that I don\'t dwell on the negative results.
For example, there are two people who would like to apply for A company.
CORRECT!
or>>An example would be about two people who plans to apply for a job at A company.
One person believes he or she will enter A company, so he or she will apply for it.
CORRECT!
or>>One of them has faith that he or she will be able to get a job at A company, so he or she submitted a resume.
But the other person is worried that he or she will fail for it so he or she doesn\\\'t apply for.
>>But the other person is worried that he or she will fail, so this person didn\'t apply.
I think future will be changed depending on how I do it.
>>I think, the result of my future can be changed depending on what I do with my life.
or>>I think, my future is conditional depending on what I do with it.
One of the best ways is to predict the negative situation and then prepare for.
>>One of the best ways is to predict the negative situation and then prepare for it.
or>>A perfect solution would be to come up with some probable negative situations so you can prepare for them.
If you do so, your worries will disappear.
CORRECT!
or>>If you follow such suggestion, you won’t have worries anymore.
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