homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [이름]! It was really so good to hear your stories. ^_^
~ T. Irene ~
Hi Irene! I am so sorry to hear that it has been raining so long in your place.
>>> Hi Irene! I am so sorry to hear that it has been raining FOR so long in your place.
It is so bright and shinny in Korea these days.
>>> Correct.
So with this beautiful day(weather), I went to a golf club with my husband yesterday to play short game golf.
>>> Correct.
I was so proud of myself because I played golf better than before.
>>> Correct.
When I hit the ball directly on the ground I came close to screaming with a joy. hihi
>>> Correct.
>>> When I hit the ball successfully from the ground I came close to screaming with a joy. hihi
I always complained and fell down by myself why my golf skill is not going to better eventhough I have been practicing a lot.
>>> I always complain and fall down on my knees because my golf skill is not improving eventhough I have been practicing a lot.
But I knew it \' Practice never let me down.\'
>>> But I knew it, \' Practicing never let me down.\'
I am going to go to a golf range today too imaging Tigerwoods
>>> I am going to a golf range again today dreaming of Tiger Woods.
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