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2019-05-10 · 첨삭 강사 Irene

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Hi Irene! I am so sorry to hear that it has been raining so long in your place. It is so bright and shinny in Korea these days. So. with this beautiful day, I went to a golf club with my husband yesterday to play short game golf. I was so proud of myself because I played golf better than before. When I hit the ball directly on the ground I came close to screaming with a joy. hihi I always complained and fell down by myself why my golf skill is not going to better eventhough I have been practicing a lot. But I knew it \' Practice never let me down.\' I am going to go to a golf range today too imaging Tigerwoods

강사 첨삭

Hello Ms. [이름]!  It was really so good to hear your stories. ^_^

~ T. Irene ~

Hi Irene!  I am so sorry to hear that it has been raining so long in your place.

>>>  Hi Irene!  I am so sorry to hear that it has been raining FOR so long in your place.
 It is so bright and shinny in Korea these days.

>>> Correct.
 So with this beautiful day(weather), I went to a golf club with my husband yesterday to play short game golf.

>>> Correct.
 I was so proud of myself because I played golf better than before.

>>> Correct. 
 When I hit the ball directly on the ground I came close to screaming with a joy. hihi

>>> Correct. 

>>> When I hit the ball successfully from the ground I came close to screaming with a joy. hihi
 I always complained and fell down by myself why my golf skill is not going to better eventhough I have been practicing a lot.

>>>  I always complain and fall down on my knees because my golf skill is not improving eventhough I have been practicing a lot.
 But I knew it \' Practice never let me down.\'

>>> But I knew it, \' Practicing never let me down.\'
 I am going to go to a golf range today too imaging Tigerwoods

>>>  I am going to a golf range again today dreaming of Tiger Woods.

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