homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [이름]! Thank you for telling me about the website. We were notified about that however I couldn\'t exactly understand most of the characters in there. Anyhow, I believe that an average of 20 minutes a day is good enough to express your stories. ^_^
~ T. Irene ~
Hi Irene! Power English website is chagnged.
>>> Hi Irene! The Power English website was/has changed.
Did you know that?
>>> Correct.
I need to time to adapt myselt to this website.
>>> I need to time to adapt to this change/new website.
I just have 3 classes left.
>>> Correct.
I am always happy to talk with you and discuss with unique topics.
>>> I am always happy to talk with you and discuss these unique topics.
When I started this Engish class, I had to spend my times a lot to learn everything and to make a correct which teacher\'s feedback.
>>> When I started this Engish class, I had to spend most of my time learning everything and checking the feedback.
but these days I don\'t push myself to study and do my homework.
>>> But these days I don\'t push myself too hard to study and do my homework.
because sometimes, I feel it is stressful .
>>> Because sometimes, I feel it is too stressful for me.
After I disburdened this stress, I feel more comfortable.
>>> After I have expressed or dissolved this stress, I feel more comfortable.
I know I have to learn and study more to speak and write better in English.
>>> I know I have to learn and study speaking and writing better in English.
I have to decide which class I will choose,
>>> I have to decide which class I will choose next.
Do you think 10 min.\'s speaking English will help to learn English?
>>> Do you think 10 minutes of English speaking will help me learn English better?
There are many calss types.
>>> Correct.
10 min 5 times a week. 3 times a week
20 min. 3times a week or 2 times a week
30 min. 3 times a week or 2 times a week
Which class will help me maintaining and developing my English?
>>> Which class will help me maintain and develop my English?
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