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Hello Ms. [이름]!  Thanks for sharing your experience with me today. You are such a friendly person. It\'s no doubt you have a lot of friends even foreign friends.  ^_^

~ T. Irene ~

Hello Irene!

>>> Correct.    

 I met a Mongolian guys last staturday by chance.

>>>   I met a Mongolian guy last Saturday by chance. 
 He has been working in korea for 3 years and 24 years old.

>>>  He is 24 years old and has been working in korea for 3 years.
 He looks exactly a healthy korean guy.

>>>  He looks exactly like a healthy Korean guy.  
 I gave my number to him and we chatted and had a talk.

>>>   I gave my number to him and we chatted.

>>>  I gave my number to him and we had a talk.
 Here are many foregin workers in korea who are from Indonesia, Mongol, Uzback, Nepal, Bangladesh Vietnam and so on.

>>> There are many foreign workers in here from Indonesia, Mongolia, Uzback, Nepal, Bangladesh, Vietnam and so on.
 Whenever I see or chance to talk with them, I feel very sorry and sympathy because I had worked with Vietnam workers before.

>>>  Whenever I see or have a chance to talk with them, I feel very sorry  or sympathize with them because I had worked with Vietnamese workers before. 
 The Vietnam workers were very lonely and sometimes suffer from homesick.

>>>   Vietnamese workers feel very lonely and sometimes suffer from homesickness. 
 I got used to invite them at my house and had a dinner with them hoping to make them happy.

>>> I used to invite them at my house for dinner hoping to make them happy. 
 They went back to their home now.

>>>   They went back home now. 
 But the weird thing is, When they had to go back to their country after 5 years working in korea, they really wanted to stay in korea longer, therefore someone ran away and became an illegal immigrant.

>>>   But the weird thing is, when they are to go back to their country after 5 years of working in Korea, they prefer to stay in Korea longer, therefore some of them run away and became illegal immigrants.

 Do they know that they never cannot come to korea again if they are an illegal immigrant.

>>>  Don\'t they know that they can never come back to Korea again if they are illegal immigrants?