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2019-05-14 · 첨삭 강사 May

학생이 쓴 원문

1. The criminal was caught red-handed. He was seen steeling the young lady’s handbag 2. People should be tolerant towards other cultures. They should be open-minded 3. Sarah couldn\'t answer the teacher’s question because she was absent-minded 4. Don’t expect him to invite you for dinner. He is tight-fisted 5. To be a translator you need to be well-informed about linguistics. I was walking along the quite street when I saw a crowd not far from the luxury entrance of a building. I was curious to know why people were so nervous. I peeped over the tiny shoulders of a young man and I saw a fierce dog in front of the enormous building. It seemed as if it was waiting impatiently for its master. The passers by were full of the shiny, sharp teeth that it showed when it grinned. An careful lady suggested to call the police to put an end to the situation which she did immediately. A generous policeman soon appeared in a neat uniform. He made a call and soon the situation was under control.

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~~Teacher May~~
1. The criminal was caught red-handed. He was seen steeling the young lady’s handbag
2. People should be tolerant towards other cultures. They should be open-minded
3. Sarah couldn\'t answer the teacher’s question because she was absent-minded
4. Don’t expect him to invite you for dinner. He is tight-fisted
5. To be a translator you need to be well-informed about linguistics.
>> ALL CORRECT
I was walking along the quite street when I saw a crowd not far from the luxury entrance of a building.
>> QUIET street (wrong)
>> BUSY street (There is a crowd on the street so it must not be quiet.)
>> LUXURY entrance (correct)
I was curious to know why people were so nervous.
>> CORRECT
I peeped over the tiny shoulders of a young man and I saw a fierce dog in front of the enormous building.
>> TINY shoulders (correct)
>> FIERCE dog (correct)
It seemed as if it was waiting impatiently for its master.
The passers by were full of the shiny, sharp teeth that it showed when it grinned.
>> FULL (wrong)
>> AFRAID
>> SHARP teeth (correct)
An careful lady suggested to call the police to put an end to the situation which she did immediately.
A generous policeman soon appeared in a neat uniform. He made a call and soon the situation was under control.
>> CORRECT


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