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2019-05-13 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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[ESSAY] In 3-5 sentences, answer the question below: >> What do you consider to be your weakness? I tend to finish my work as late as possible. I could finish my work anyway, but it sometimes caused problems. For instance, when the deadline came in front of my nose I was trying to finish the job, and then some urgent matter issued suddenly, so I had to handle the situation and finish the job in the same time. I could be able to do them all but it was horrible because I was totally out of my mind at that time. After that, I try to finish my work as soon as I can handle it.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

 


Thank you for sending your homework. I hope you study the corrections carefully. 


 


Cheers!

Jean




[ESSAY]
In 3-5 sentences, answer the question below:

>> What do you consider to be your weakness?

I tend to finish my work as late as possible.  I could finish my work anyway, but it sometimes caused problems. 
>> I tend to finish my task as late as possible because I know that I could finish it anyway, but it sometimes causes some problems. 

For instance, when the deadline came in front of my nose I was trying to finish the job, and then some urgent matter issued suddenly, so I had to handle the situation and finish the job in the same time.
>> For instance, there was this time when I had a deadline staring me in the face so I was trying to finish the job, but then an urgent matter suddenly came up that\'s why I ended up handling that situation and finishing my task at the same time. 

I could be able to do them all but it was horrible because I was totally out of my mind at that time. After that, I try to finish my work as soon as I can handle it.
>> I actually could handle them, but it was still horrible because I was totally out of my mind at that time. Owing to that experience, I try to finish my task as soon as I can manage. 

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