homework
학생이 쓴 원문
when I was younger, I was an athlete. so I had to have good score rather than many people so I could to try hard everyday.
So I could get a medal of gold and I received the best compliment from my teacher. It is the best compliment that I\'ve ever had.
I also I used to get a good score and I received the good compliment from my parents.
anyway thank you for give me a good question everyday so I also try to study better hardier than past
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Thank you for the effort!
This is always good practice for you.
I\'m rally happy that you are giving it attention.
I know that better things are yet to come.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
when I was younger, I was an athlete.
>> When I was younger, I was an athlete.
so I had to have good score rather than many people so I could to try hard everyday.
>> I had to work hard every day because I needed to get a score better than everyone else\'s.
So I could get a medal of gold and I received the best compliment from my teacher.
>> I had to work hard every day because I needed to get a score better than everyone else\'s.
So I could get a medal of gold and I received the best compliment from my teacher.
>> That\'s why I received a gold medal and was complimented by my teacher.
It is the best compliment that I\'ve ever had.
>> It was the best compliment that I\'ve ever gotten.
I also I used to get a good score and I received the good compliment from my parents.
>> I also received praise from my parents whenever I got a good score.
>> It was the best compliment that I\'ve ever gotten.
I also I used to get a good score and I received the good compliment from my parents.
>> I also received praise from my parents whenever I got a good score.
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