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2019-05-14 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

학생이 쓴 원문

I haven\'t been lived apartment. Using a cellphone is very convenient. I think that Korea isn\'t a lot of the crime than another country. My house is near downtown. My parents are living to the suburb.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!


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Teacher Lucy



I haven\'t been lived apartment.

>>I haven\'t lived in an apartment.


Using a cellphone is very convenient.

>>CORRECT!

>>Using cellphone is very convenient. 


I think that Korea isn\'t a lot of the crime than another country.

>>I think Korea doesn\'t have lots of crimes than other countries.


My house is near downtown.

>>CORRECT!

>>My house is close to downtown.


My parents are living to the suburb.

>>My parents are living in the suburb.

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