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Thank you so much for this factual composition. ^^
I think it was actually a good decision to impeach that ex president of yours.
I hope Korea is doing much better now. ^^
You are a great nation!
~~t. Ally
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Two years ago, The Korean president Park geun-hye was impeached.
>> Two years ago, the Korean president Park Geun-Hye was impeached.
The reason was that the Korean president depends on another person.
>> The reason was that the Korean president depended on another person.
that person was Korean heavyweight that operates goverment.
>> That person was a Korean heavyweight who operated in the government.
When it was made public, most of Koreans was angry.
>> When it was made public, most of the Koreans were angry.
People held candlelight vigil for few month.
>> People held a candlelight vigil for a few months.
Finally she was impeched.
>> And she was finally impeached.
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