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When I make a decision of people's first impression, I usually look whether counterpart usually smile or not. I want to have funny time with counterpart so if counterpart have dull character, I don't want to make a deep relationship with one. Of course, there is a case that counterpart show real character after becoming intimate. So, I have to have a patience until one show real side.
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Hello Jin Young. Thank you for this. I appreciate the answer. What about you? What do most people say about you, their impression of you when they met you for the first time?
- T. Beth
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When I make a decision of people\'s first impression, I usually look whether counterpart usually smile or not. >>> When I create an impression on people I meet for the first time, I usually look whether other person always smiles on not.
I want to have funny time with counterpart so if counterpart have dull character, I don\'t want to make a deep relationship with one.
>>> I want to have a fun time with others so if the other person has a dull character, I don\'t want to make a deep relationship with him/her.
Of course, there is a case that counterpart show real character after becoming intimate.
>>> OR: Of course, there is a possibility that the counterpart would show his/her real character after becoming intimate.
So, I have to have a patience until one show real side.
>>> So, I have to have a patience until one shows his/her real side.
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