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2019-05-14 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

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What drink do you often have but best avoiede? It\'s coffee. I drink coffee three times per day. I don\'t care the type of coffee, excluding espresso. I tried to drink espresso once. But it didn\'t good for me. I failed to drink all. There are so many kinds and origins. Latte, Flat white, Affogato, Cappuccino, etc. Usally I drink a coffee at my office. My collegue prepares for three kinds of coffee. Latte, Americano and 3 in 1 mixed coffee. In the moring I drink Americano. In the noon, latte. In the afternoon, 3 in 1 mixed coffee. There is a serious problem when I drink coffee often like this. I can\'t sleep well. Sometimes I suffer from insomnia. After insomnia day, I drink coffee a lot. As a result, I suffer from insomnia again. It is a vicious circle. The vicious circle keeps repeating. I konw I have to reduce coffee. Or I quit to drink coffee. But I can\'t.

강사 첨삭


Hi, Ms. [이름]!


Thank you for sharing about your taste when it comes to coffee. :)

Well, as for me, I rarely drink coffee because it makes me palpitate. :)

Anyhow, coffee is good for those who have graveyard shift.


Let\'s exchange our thoughts about it on Thursday :).


sincerely,

Teacher Lucy


It\'s coffee.

>>CORRECT!


I drink coffee three times per day. 

>>CORRECT!

>>I drink coffee thrice a day.


I don\'t care the type of coffee, excluding espresso.

>>CORRECT!

>>I drink no matter what type except espresso.


I tried to drink espresso once.

>>CORRECT!

>>I\'ve once tried espresso.


But it didn\'t good for me.

>>But it didn\'t do good to me.

>>But it wasn\'t good for me.


I failed to drink all.

>>CORRECT!

>>I can\'t intake all.


There are so many kinds and origins.

>>CORRECT!

>>It has numerous kinds and origins.


Latte, Flat white, Affogato, Cappuccino, etc.

>>CORRECT!


Usally I drink a coffee at my office.

>>Usually, I drink a cup of coffee at my office.


My collegue prepares for three kinds of coffee. 

>>CORRECT!

>>My acquaintance prepares for three kinds of coffee.


Latte, Americano and 3 in 1 mixed coffee. 

>>CORRECT!


In the moring I drink Americano.

>>In the morning, I drink Americano.


In the noon, latte.

>>At noon, latte.


In the afternoon, 3 in 1 mixed coffee. 

>>CORRECT!


There is a serious problem when I drink coffee often like this. 

>>CORRECT!

 
I can\'t sleep well.

>>CORRECT!


Sometimes I suffer from insomnia.

>>Sometimes, I suffer from insomnia.


After insomnia day, I drink coffee a lot. 

>>After insomnia, I still drink a lot of coffee.


As a result, I suffer from insomnia again.

>>CORRECT!

>>As an outcome, I suffer from insomnia again.


It is  a vicious circle.

>>CORRECT!


The vicious circle keeps repeating. 

>>CORRECT!


I konw I have to reduce coffee.

>>I know I have to reduce drinking coffee.


Or I quit to drink coffee. 

>>CORRECT!


But I can\'t.

>>CORRECT!


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