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Hi, Ms. [이름]!
Thank you for sharing about your taste when it comes to coffee. :)
Well, as for me, I rarely drink coffee because it makes me palpitate. :)
Anyhow, coffee is good for those who have graveyard shift.
Let\'s exchange our thoughts about it on Thursday :).
sincerely,
Teacher Lucy
It\'s coffee.
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I drink coffee three times per day.
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>>I drink coffee thrice a day.
I don\'t care the type of coffee, excluding espresso.
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>>I drink no matter what type except espresso.
I tried to drink espresso once.
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>>I\'ve once tried espresso.
But it didn\'t good for me.
>>But it didn\'t do good to me.
>>But it wasn\'t good for me.
I failed to drink all.
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>>I can\'t intake all.
There are so many kinds and origins.
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>>It has numerous kinds and origins.
Latte, Flat white, Affogato, Cappuccino, etc.
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Usally I drink a coffee at my office.
>>Usually, I drink a cup of coffee at my office.
My collegue prepares for three kinds of coffee.
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>>My acquaintance prepares for three kinds of coffee.
Latte, Americano and 3 in 1 mixed coffee.
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In the moring I drink Americano.
>>In the morning, I drink Americano.
In the noon, latte.
>>At noon, latte.
In the afternoon, 3 in 1 mixed coffee.
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There is a serious problem when I drink coffee often like this.
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I can\'t sleep well.
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Sometimes I suffer from insomnia.
>>Sometimes, I suffer from insomnia.
After insomnia day, I drink coffee a lot.
>>After insomnia, I still drink a lot of coffee.
As a result, I suffer from insomnia again.
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>>As an outcome, I suffer from insomnia again.
It is a vicious circle.
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The vicious circle keeps repeating.
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I konw I have to reduce coffee.
>>I know I have to reduce drinking coffee.
Or I quit to drink coffee.
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But I can\'t.
>>CORRECT!
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