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2019-05-15 · 첨삭 강사 Irene

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Hi Irnen! I want to tell you about someone with celebrating teacher\'s day. She always gives all her energy to others and tries to make people happy everday. If you talk to with her , you cannot help falling in love with her. Because her voice is so delightful, charming and bright. She always tries to listen to others with a big patient like everybody\'s best frined. She never has complained or excused of her work and her life. She must be very strict to herself not to make a mistake, but she is so generous to others. She doesn\'t like being alon. She likes to sing a song ,dancing and going on a trip every weekend. She likes eating tasty food, she eats as much as her teeth broken. hihihi She is so frank without any pretense. Her name is Irene ,one of the best teacher in Power English. Thanks for teaching me every day Irene!

강사 첨삭

Hello Ms. [이름]!  Ohh!  Thank you so much for this compliment. I really appreciate it. I have tears in my eyes because of happiness. You know me a lot and that makes me so happy. ^_^Thank you so much. It\'s a nice day out there!  Enjoy the weather!

~. T. Irene ~

Hi Irnen!
I want to tell you about someone with celebrating teacher\'s day.
>>>   
I want to tell you about someone who is celebrating the Teacher\'s Day.
She always gives all her energy to others and tries to make people happy everyday.

>>>  Correct.   
 If you talk to with her , you cannot help falling in love with her.

>>>   If you talk to her, you cannot help but fall in love with her.  
 Because her voice is so delightful, charming and bright.

>>>  Correct.   
 She always tries to listen to others with a big patient like everybody\'s best frined.

>>>  She always tries to listen to others patiently like a  best friend.  
 She never has complained or excused of her work and her life.

>>>   She never has complained or excused herself from work and her life.  
 She must be very strict to herself not to make a mistake, but she is so generous to others.

>>>  She must be very strict with herself not to make any mistake, but she is also so generous to others.  
 She doesn\'t like being alone.

>>>    Correct.  
 She likes to sing a song ,dancing and going on a trip every weekend.

>>>    She likes to sing songs, dance and go on trips every weekend.
 She likes eating tasty food, she eats as much as her teeth broken. hihihi

>>>    She likes eating tasty food and  she eats a lot that she broke a tooth. hihihi 
 She is so frank without any pretense.
>>> 
Correct.    
Her name is Irene, one of the best teacher in Power English.

>>>  Her name is Irene, one of the best teachers in Power English. 
 Thanks for teaching me every day Irene! (You\'re most welcome! ^_^)

>>>  Correct. 



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