homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [이름]! Ohh! Thank you so much for this compliment. I really appreciate it. I have tears in my eyes because of happiness. You know me a lot and that makes me so happy. ^_^Thank you so much. It\'s a nice day out there! Enjoy the weather!
~. T. Irene ~
Hi Irnen!
I want to tell you about someone with celebrating teacher\'s day.
>>> I want to tell you about someone who is celebrating the Teacher\'s Day.
She always gives all her energy to others and tries to make people happy everyday.
>>> Correct.
If you talk to with her , you cannot help falling in love with her.
>>> If you talk to her, you cannot help but fall in love with her.
Because her voice is so delightful, charming and bright.
>>> Correct.
She always tries to listen to others with a big patient like everybody\'s best frined.
>>> She always tries to listen to others patiently like a best friend.
She never has complained or excused of her work and her life.
>>> She never has complained or excused herself from work and her life.
She must be very strict to herself not to make a mistake, but she is so generous to others.
>>> She must be very strict with herself not to make any mistake, but she is also so generous to others.
She doesn\'t like being alone.
>>> Correct.
She likes to sing a song ,dancing and going on a trip every weekend.
>>> She likes to sing songs, dance and go on trips every weekend.
She likes eating tasty food, she eats as much as her teeth broken. hihihi
>>> She likes eating tasty food and she eats a lot that she broke a tooth. hihihi
She is so frank without any pretense.
>>> Correct.
Her name is Irene, one of the best teacher in Power English.
>>> Her name is Irene, one of the best teachers in Power English.
Thanks for teaching me every day Irene! (You\'re most welcome! ^_^)
>>> Correct.
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