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 Hello Ms. [이름]!  thank for your thoughts about this issue. ^_^

~ T. Irene ~

ESSAY: One of the issues in politics is about politicians who want to stay longer in power. What is your opinion about extending the term of the president? Explain. 
I think extending the term of the president has pros and cons.

>>> Correct.

 If the president who really works for the public indeed, the president must works more the ligal terms.

>>>  If the president indeed works hard for the public, then maybe it\'s okay for him to hold the position longer. 

 But If the president is corrupted or works for him/her own property like our expresidents, He/she should not be extended the term of president.

 >>>  But if the president is corrupt or works for his/her own benefits like our ex-presidents then his/her term should not be extended.

 It happend in korea 2 years ago.

>>> Correct.

we dismissed the president Park and put her in Jail charging taking a bribe and dereliction or her duty .

>>> We removed Ms. [Name] from the office of the president and imprisoned her for taking bribery or not doing her duty.

If we didn\'t know about the crimes, She might have the law about the term of the president change.

>>> If we didn\'t discover about her illegal actions, there might have been a chance that she could change the terms of the presidency.

 Well, personaly, I agree with the extending the term of the president. because I want to give more chance and opportunity to the good president.

>>>  Well, on a personal note, I agree with the extension of the term of the president because I want to give more chances and opportunities to the good candidates for the presidency.