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I don\'t think we need to retake a driver\'s license.
If I have to retake it every 5 years, who support money which make a exam.
Another thing that there is no resonable why retake a driver\'s license.
if we are going to prevent a driver accident, we have to change legal of the driver.
all of them who have a driver\'s license can drive well, but a lot of people drive their car after drink a soju, beer etc
anyway I don\'t agree about retake it
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
I think you feel really strongly about the topic.^^
That\'s why you could give a lot of ideas.
You expressed yourself really well.
Keep it up!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I don\'t think we need to retake a driver\'s license.>> I don\'t think we need to retake the test to get a driver\'s license.
If I have to retake it every 5 years, who support money which make a exam.
>> If I have to retake it every 5 years, who will give the money for me to take the exam?
Another thing that there is no resonable why retake a driver\'s license.
>> Another thing is that it makes no sense to retake the test to get a driver\'s license.
if we are going to prevent a driver accident, we have to change legal of the driver.
>> If we want to prevent accidents caused by drivers, we have to change the law itself.
all of them who have a driver\'s license can drive well, but a lot of people drive their car after drink a soju, beer etc
>> All people who have driver\'s licenses can drive well, however, a lot of them usually drink and drive.
anyway I don\'t agree about retake it
>> In any case, I don\'t agree in retaking the test.
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