Homework
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HOMEWORK:
Writing Exercise: What is the best restaurant you’ve been to? Describe it. Who do you respect the most? Why? Answer in 5 sentences or more.
I think best restaurant is Italy\'s restaurant.
I went to the honeymoon in Italy. So I remember that The best restaurant was in Venezia. We had a seafood and Pizza. Until now I could not forgot the Italy\'s food. If I any chance I want to go again the Italy .
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
You\'re right!
Italian restaurants are the best.
I\'m so happy to hear about your experience.
It sounds like a special time for you.
Keep sharing your stories.
I look forward to them^^
~~ Teacher SHARON
I think best restaurant is Italy\'s restaurant. >> I think the best kind of restaurant is an Italian restaurant.
I went to the honeymoon in Italy.
I went to the honeymoon in Italy.
>> I went to Italy for my honeymoon.
So I remember that The best restaurant was in Venezia.
>> I remember that the best restaurant was in Venezia.
We had a seafood and Pizza.
>> We had seafood and pizza.
Until now I could not forgot the Italy\'s food.
>> I can\'t forget that Italian food until now.
If I any chance I want to go again the Italy .
>> If I get the chance, I want to go to Italy again.
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