Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
Writing Exercise: What was the most important lesson your parents taught you? Answer in 5 sentences or more.
I learnd to my parents that patience, diligent, kind, passion.
All of this was influenced by mother. My father gave to me that art\'s talent. It is biological DNA talent. I learned life\'s attitude and way. So I will effort to live better then them.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
It sounds like you have really good parents.
I\'m sure that you would teach a lot of things to your son as well.
It\'s just the cycle of life.
I salute you as a wonderful mother.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I learnd to my parents that patience, diligent, kind, passion.>> I learned about patience, diligence, kindness and passion from my parents.
All of this was influenced by mother.
All of this was influenced by mother.
>> My mother always had a strong influence in my life.
My father gave to me that art\'s talent.
>> I got my artistic talents from my father.
It is biological DNA talent.
>> I inherited it from him.
I learned life\'s attitude and way.
>> I learned how to develop my attitude and lifestyle.
So I will effort to live better then them.
>> That\'s why I will always make an effort to live a better life than they had.
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