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2019-05-16 · 첨삭 강사 Irene

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Hi Irene! Here is the more stories about my experiences of menopause. When I felt menopause symptomes, I easily get irrirated with anything and feel blues like my life is in vain. and sometimes, my heart is pumping hard without any reasons and my face turns to red although I feel cold. In korea, most of husbands who\'s wife is in menopuase have to be a sincere survant or be a good boy for their wives. Because, husbands know how hard it is to get over the stress of menopause and they are afraid of wives\'s temper. Evenmore, children also must be care and study mother\'s face if she is angry. Menopause symtomes is the most powerful things to control our love ones. hihihi Have a nice day and donn\'t care about menopause. You are still so young. hihi

강사 첨삭

Hello Ms. [이름]! ^_^  I don\'t know what to say about menopause because I have never considered it. I have never thought about experiencing it actually. ha ha ha I\'m still in denial stage.

~. T. Irene ~

Hi Irene!
Here is the more stories about my experiences of menopause.

>>>   Here are more stories about my experiences regarding menopause. 
 When I felt menopause, I easily get irrirated with anything and feel blues like my life is in vain.

>>>     When I started menopausing, I easily got irrirated with everything and it felt like my life was in vain.
 and sometimes, my heart is pumping hard without any reasons and my face turns to red although I feel cold.

 >>> Sometimes, my heart would pump hard without any reason and my face would feel flushed although I am feeling cold.  
 In korea, most of husbands who\'s wife is in menopuase have to be a survant or be a good boy for their wives.

>>>     In Korea, most husbands who\'s wife is undergoing menopause have to serve or be good to their wife.
 Because, husbands know how hard it is to get over the stress of menopause.

>>>     Because, husbands know how hard it is to get over the stress of menopausing. 
 Evenmore, children also must be care and study mother\'s face if she is angry.

>>>     Moreover, children also must be sensitive to their mom\'s moods.
 Menopause symtomes is the most powerful things to control our love ones. hihihi

>>>     Menopausal symptoms are powerful tools to control our love ones. hihihi
 Have a nice day and don\'t care about menopause.

>>>     Have a nice day and don\'t think about menopause. 
 You are still so young. hihi

>>>    Correct.





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