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2011-11-23 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

학생이 쓴 원문

hello~ teacher! now is late night so i'm very tired. My age is eighteen. Our society devide grade of permit watching programs. Although we observe this grade but i think this rule is ovserved.

강사 첨삭

Hello there Mi Ji! Thank you for your composition today. I appreciate your effort in doing your homework despite being very exhausted. Keep up the good work! Take care and have a nice day! T. JanE ^^ hello~ teacher! >> Correct.now is late night so i\'m very tired.>> Now it\'s late at night and I\'m very tired.My age is eighteen. >> Correct. >> I am eighteen years old. >> I am eighteen years of age.Our society devide grade of permit watching programs. >> Our government classifies tv programs into different categories.Although we observe this grade but i think this rule is ovserved. >> This rule is implemented but it\'s not strictly followed.

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