Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, Seong Won!
Thank you for writing an essay today.
It was short but it\'s nonetheless great. Keep it up and keep writing! ^^
I\'ll be waiting for more essay from you. :)
I agree that showing your weaknesses is way harder that showing your strengths.
I guess that\'s why many people pretend that they\'re okay even when they\'re not.
Anyhow, I hope you\'re doing great.
See you again tomorrow. ^^
~Teacher Charry
I think it\'s more courageous to show one\'s vulnerability.
>> CORRECT!
Most people only want to show their perfect self, because it takes a lot of courage to show their vulnerability in this regard.
>> CORRECT!
There\'s a problem, and I don\'t know what else to write here.
>> CORRECT!
Now my mom told me to stop using my phone, I think I have stop using it.
>> Now, my mom told me to stop using my phone and I think I have to stop using it.
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