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2019-05-17 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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Hello, Beth. I did the homework after longtime. I’m in the clinic now. When I came the clinic, my sister is in the clinic. Hahaha So I’m going to eat a mara soup again. :) See you tomorrow. What do you think of spam emails? I don’t like spam emails. I receive many spam email everyday. I often ask to stop the email but the email keep to come to me. So I try to don’t care that.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! Thank you for this. That\'s funny. You ended up eating mala soup with your sister anyway. Hahah. See you in class!
- T. Beth
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Hello, Beth. 
>>>   correct
I did the homework after longtime. 
>>>   I did my homework after along time.
>>>  OR: It\'s been a long time since I last did my homework. 
I’m in the clinic now. 
>>>   correct
When I came the clinic, my sister is in the clinic. 
>>>   When I came to the clinic, my sister was already in the clinic.
Hahaha
So I’m going to eat a mara soup again. :)
>>>   correct (mala soup) 
See you tomorrow. 
>>>   correct

What do you think of spam emails?
I don’t like spam emails. 
>>>   correct
I receive many spam email everyday. 
>>>  I receive many spam e-mails everyday. 
I often ask to stop the email but the email keep to come to me. 
>>>  I often block those e-mails but they keep sending it to me.
So I try to don’t care that.
>>> So I try not to mind those.
>>> OR: So I try to just ignore them.

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