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Well..I don’t know what is your question well.
if the store in our country closure, will bring death of local because these days, a lot of people visit in our country in order to buy korean traditional item, visit the store and enter the musuem etc.
However a lot of store closure, many people don’t visit in the area.
So I really agree this opinion, anyway I always thank you for you because you give me the good question. Have a good night
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Hi [이름]!
There are many big supermarkets and malls being built nowadays.
That is why many small businesses are going bankrupt.
The question is if you agree that more supermarkets should be opened in neighborhoods.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
if the store in our country closure, will bring death of local because these days, a lot of people visit in our country in order to buy korean traditional item, visit the store and enter the musuem etc.>> The closure of stores would mean the death of the economy because many visitors come to the country to buy traditional items and visit many stores and museums.
However a lot of store closure, many people don’t visit in the area.
>> If many stores go out of business, many people wouldn\'t want to visit these areas.
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