homework

Hello Ms. [이름]! Happy Friday! Oh My! ^_^  I don\'t know what to say. Let\'s talk about it on Monday. hahaha

~ T. Irene ~

ESSAY: What is your standard for beauty (male/female)? Is beauty important for your partner?
Hi Irene~
I went to a Karaoke opening party yesterday.

>>>  Correct.    
 The owner is my friend ,I have known her for 4 years.

>>>  The owner is my friend ,and I have known her for 4 years.

We became friend when I went to her Karaoke as a guest,

>>>  We became friends when I went to her Karaoke place as a guest.  
 She has divorced 15 years ago and she had to make money for her child after divorcing.

>>>   She got a divorce 15 years ago and she had to make money for her child after that.
 The reason I talk about her is that my friend is very semiliar to your sister.

>>>  The reason I mentioned her is I think your sister is in a similar situation.
 My frined has always realationships with men (not man) hihihi

>>>  My friend is always in a relationship with men (not only one man).
 She always talk about men who like her something like looking, age , character and wealth.

>>> She always talks about men who liked her. She would tell me about their looks, age, character and wealth.  
 I thought she seems like a loveholic and she always get love affairs

>>> I think she can be called a loveholic so she\'s always getting into relationships.
 But this point is different with your sister because she never fall in love .

>>>  But she differs from your sister in such a way that she never falls in love.
 Do you know why she doesn\'t want to fall in love?

>>>  Correct.  
 She says, \'Every men are exactly the same under this sky\'

>>>   She says, \'Every man is exactly the same under this sky\'.

>>>  She says, \'All men are exactly the same under this same sky\'.
 Frankly speaking, I don\'t agree with her at this mention but I can recognize how many times she get hurts from love

>>>   Frankly speaking, I don\'t agree with her on this but I can recognize how many times she got hurt fr because of love.