homework

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In 3-5 sentences, answer the question below:

>>Cancer patients find that marijuana stops their pain. Should it be legal for them? 

There are several countries have been allowing that people have a small amount of marijuana and a few countries made it legal to use it this year. 

>> There are several countries that have been allowing their people to have a small amount of marijuana for medicinal purposes and few of them made such usage legal this year. 

However, I don\'t think that is a good idea.

>> or: Be that as it may, I believe that this is not a good idea. 

Some say that marijuana could be the the entrance to use drugs. 

>> Some say that using marijuana may serve as the catalyst that can make people try other types of drugs, such as heroin or cocaine. 

They insist that most of addicted people started with marijuana. 

>> They insist that most drug addicts started with marijuana. 

Even if it\'s really good for stopping pain for cancer patients, I wouldn\'t be able to agree with the goverment allow to people use it.

>> Granting that it would stop the pain of cancer patients, I still wouldn\'t agree with the legalisation of cannabis.