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2019-05-20 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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DIRECTION: Chose the correct conjunctions. 1. In spite of the fact that oil was discovered in Alberta as early as 1914, the oil and gas industry really took off in the late 1960s when large deposits were discovered. 2. In order to museums, libraries and archives are cultural institutions, they should ensure that their collections are built up in accordance with universally recognized moral principles. 3. Smallpox was eventually declared eradicated in 1980, nevertheless a vigorous campaign of immunization by the World Health Organization. 4. During the war of 1812, the Royal Navy had more ships than the U.S. Navy; otherwise, they were able to maintain a tight blockade on American waters and transport British Army troops to American shores. 5. Telecare is a telephone support service in the US which provides contact with people who are alone and isolated because they are aged or have disabilities.

강사 첨삭

[이름],

Thank you for giving time to finish your homework despite your busy schedule.(\",)

~Lynn

1. In spite of the fact that oil was discovered in Alberta as early as 1914, the oil and gas industry really took off in the late 1960s when large deposits were discovered.
>> correct!
2. In order to museums, libraries and archives are cultural institutions, they should ensure that their collections are built up in accordance with universally recognized moral principles.
>> CONSIDERING THAT museums, libraries and archives are cultural institutions, they should ensure that their collections are built up in accordance with universally recognized moral principles.
3. Smallpox was eventually declared eradicated in 1980, nevertheless a vigorous campaign of immunization by the World Health Organization.
>> Smallpox was eventually declared eradicated in 1980, THANKS TO a vigorous campaign of immunization by the World Health Organization.
4. During the war of 1812, the Royal Navy had more ships than the U.S. Navy; otherwise, they were able to maintain a tight blockade on American waters and transport British Army troops to American shores.
>> During the war of 1812, the Royal Navy had more ships than the U.S. Navy; THEREFORE, they were able to maintain a tight blockade on American waters and transport British Army troops to American shores.
5. Telecare is a telephone support service in the US which provides contact with people who are alone and isolated because they are aged or have disabilities.

>> correct!

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